Tesshu Ariyama
Villager
The Great Demon King/The God of Darkness
Posts: 2
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Post by Tesshu Ariyama on Oct 14, 2007 12:59:42 GMT -5
Name: Tesshu Ariyama
Age:7000 (looks 18)
Type:Demon/human
Weapon:hands/demonic energy
Desctiption:pic added...
Gem Type:none
Gem pic:none
Personaltiy:tends to keep to himself
History:Tesshu spends his life traveling the world and learning the ways of every culture across the globe. Expertly trained in the ways of sorcery and the art of fighting, he has proven a worthy foe to many challenges along the way. He is what some people call a "ladies man" but it doesn't bother him to be called as such. He loves dark places at times and is somewhat a party animal. His gaze somewhat hipnotic, he usually tends to keep to himself. His scars and old burn marks he has on his body is proof enough that he has trained hard to become the best that he can. but he wants to push himself even further.
Powers: hasn't used in 2000 years so his power has dwindled. in other words his powers arent as strong as they use to be.
(this has been the same profile i used on many other forums and back when i had aol about 8 years ago. this is the way my char has been for those 8 years.)
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Cedric
Villager
"I don't believe in gravity."
Posts: 24
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Post by Cedric on Oct 14, 2007 18:32:14 GMT -5
Hey I may be out of line by saying this cause I'm not sure if I'm allowed to respond in another persons thread. But there are alot of things wrong with this profile.
1) The forums history only dates back a little over 1000 years so your character has to follow that format too.
2)Type is not Demon/Human. It is your class, like a warrior or an archer. Please refer to the profile guide for more info on that topic.
3) Every power and person on this site has to have a gem. That is forum law. If you don't want a gem then tough luck it is reguired to have one here.
4) Personality needs to be a little better than "tends to keep to himself." That is no better than saying your personality will be revieled through rping. Please add on to it alittle.
5)Say what your powers are. Just saying that his powers are weaker than they once were is useless because we don't know how powerful he was to begin with.
6)Please write in full sentences instead of writing like on AIM.
That is everything I wanted to say. Your profile has alot of potential, and if you would fix those problems I mentioned I'm sure you would be fun to rp with.
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Post by tayu on Oct 15, 2007 11:25:44 GMT -5
Also if I may step in, I see no pic...and if there is no pic, then you must describe him. Sorry that too is a law last time I checked. But I think you have great potential, once this is fixxed to do very well.
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Tesshu Ariyama
Villager
The Great Demon King/The God of Darkness
Posts: 2
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Post by Tesshu Ariyama on Oct 15, 2007 17:52:48 GMT -5
srry i had a picture i just put it in user notes instead of signature ^^; i'll see what i can do about my profile even tho my char has been the same like this for more than 8 years..
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